Critique my business card!

LKDFW said:
Did you list all the services you offer on the back side?
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It will be a magnetic card.... there will be no back side. Im going to have a website by the time I have them printed so I will just put a link to that
 
I think you have too many font sizes and styles on the card. More than 4 different sizes and styles per page is considered " busy". I like the background and the overall layout. Try fewer fonts, see how it looks.



Good luck
 
HomicidalSloth said:
I don't like the "email for a free estimate" thing. I'd lose that personally. Other than that, I like it.
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I agree with the email suggestion and maybe use it to book appointments. Some people use emails for a planning reminder.



I like the back blank to write information, estimates, discounts and such for potential clients.



Cards are for direct sales IMO should be used in that regard. I don’t leave a card without a hand shake or a brief education on detailing.
 
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sorry, i made it too small but do you like this layout better?
 
Keeping to two fonts and styles is best, the Company name can be one and everything else another. Limit yourself to no more than three sizes.



Personally I don't like the opaque pane on the left along with the normal view on the right, it makes the card hard to read. Either stick to opaque for the whole card with dark lettering or the actual image with white like you have.
 
I think it looks much better with the second layout. I like the opaque pane because to me it signifies the change from blurry to sharp and shiny just like the cars you will detail. It also makes the card different, which is a plus. Nice work!
 
I think if you flip the image horizontally you might be better off as your text will fall on the darker portion of the background. Also, can you PS out the handicap parking sign? Other than those to nit-picks, :up



M2C.
 
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