Full time/part time pros - need your critique

Z

Zealot

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OK, long story short but since WorldCom laid me off, and the telecom market is in the sewer (way past being in the toilet), I figured there aint nothing better than working for yourself. I've been working on a brochure/flyer and have the front done, with the back being 90% complete. Yes there is some plagiarism from other sources on the web, but they're nowhere near FL so I won't be taking any business away fromthem ;) Lay it on me guys, and be honest in telling me what you think of the front so far. Thanks!



http://home.tampabay.rr.com/dmpatterson/brochure.jpg
 
Click here and go to the bottom of the page. I put a link there. My picture at the top is fubar, but I'll fix that later. Thanks guys:up
 
BlackRegal said:
DP-Jedi... I like it. I think it has a nice crisp look and is well organized. Your "motto" is pretty good, actually got me to crack a smile. Is that original? Sucks to hear about the layoff by the way. Hopefully your business takes off for you.:up
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Wow thanks!! I'm not clever enough to think up a motto like that on my own. I vaguely remember seeing it somewhere on this forum and tucked it away in my memory for future reference :)



Dave
 
It's very good. Only thing I would do is include some close-up photos of parts of your car eg. wheel/tire, upholstery, hood reflection, etc. But you have that whole other side of the brochure to work with. Good luck with the biz, I hope to be doing the same shortly.
 
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